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Hey im goin outta town 4 a week wit my family so im gonna need 2 know whats gonna be going on in class when im gone so I don't fail


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Hello (professors name)


I will not be attending class for the next week. I know it's really important to attend all class sessions to understand all the material that is presented in class, however, this absence is unavoidable and necessary with personal issues that I must attend to. If possible, I would appreciate the possibility of meeting with you during a convenient time for you to go over the materials that I will be missing, with a possibility to turn in any of the assignments on a timely basis.


Thank you,


John Fischer

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John Fischer
1/25/15

"As the weeks and months unfolded we realized that we were the victims of a broken promise." Martin Luther Kind, Jr.

Martin Luther King was an eloquent speaker, who spoke about real feelings that woke up people who just went about their days accepting whatever society gave them, even if they felt belittled and worthless as a human being. This quote does not stir anger or rage, it sends a message that every person was entitled to a free life where no stereotypes or racism should interfere with their freedom. I can relate to this quote in many ways as a caucasian individual in today's political promises where a politician promises to help students with student loans that are due upon graduation get assistance, yet when elected vote against the very platform they promised so they would be elected. Although the promises of the 60's and the Martin Luther King's platform where much more serious and worthy of demonstrations, I still can relate to broken promises.

Simple, complex, compound, and Compound complex sentences

John Fischer
1/18/15
College writing 2



Simple- "He has refused his Assent to Laws, the most wholesome and necessary for the public good."



Complex- "He has dissolved Representative House repeatedly, for opposing with manly firmness his invasions on the rights of the people."


Compound-"He has erected a multitude of New Offices, and sent hither swarms of Office to harass our people, and eat out their substance."



Compound complex- "He has refused to pass other Laws for the accommodations of large districts of people, unless those people would relinquish the right of Representation in the Legislature, a right inestimable to them and formidable to tyrants only."

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